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Tuesday, 31 January 2012




TWILIGHT13'S COMPETITION: TABBYCAT16

By Tabbycat16 (Age 11)

This is my entry for Twilights competition: 

 

Silver McKay is a small 11year old, with eyes too big for her face. She has limp blonde hair and ties it up with a jaunty red ribbon that emphasizes her peaky white face. She is bullied at school and is the odd one out. She wears ripped jeans and a dirty, stained t-shirt. Her shoes are scuffed at the toes. She is clever and is top of the class, but that dosent seem to help her make friends. She used to be popular, but ever since her sister died, people have begun to move away from her.

 

I hope you like it Twilight!





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  • princessKG (Age 10) wrote on Tuesday, 31 January 2012 @ 07:30

    I nearly cried!!!

  • honeybun00 (Age 11) wrote on Tuesday, 31 January 2012 @ 17:08

    :)

  • cowmoo1170 (Age 10) wrote on Wednesday, 1 February 2012 @ 19:11

    Poor her

  • superdog7 (Age 12) wrote on Friday, 3 February 2012 @ 14:32

    poor her