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Tuesday, 31 January 2012
The World Inside My Head
By carnary216 (Age 14)
This is a poem I made up:
The World inside my head,
Is a place of fascination,
But to open it's door,
Needs a little imaginiation.
The Sun's forever shining,
In the world within my head,
Where the sky is always blue,
And no-one goes to bed.
All sorrow and fear are cst away,
Love is spread around,
Anger and war are pushed aside,
Happiness is easily found.
The world inside my head,
Is an amazing place to me.
It's who I am,
And it's where I want to be.
Thanks for reading, and if you like it, pleeeaaasssseeee comment or give it a thumbs up. Thankyou!!!!
P.S The pic is meant to be what the world inside my head looks like :) x
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honeybun00 (Age 11) wrote on Tuesday, 31 January 2012 @ 17:29
WOW! You should become an author because your'e excellent at writing :)
carnary216 (Age 14) wrote on Tuesday, 31 January 2012 @ 18:02
Thankyou!!!! You write really nice comments, and so do loads of people on fn! :)
cowmoo1170 (Age 10) wrote on Wednesday, 1 February 2012 @ 19:23
That is so good