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Friday, 10 February 2012


Creative writing

The Fifty word story competition!

By ojn9 (Age 10)

 

Easy
write a story in EXCACTLY 50 words
exsamples

"Hello" I said shyly to the boy , "My name is Pacific , Pacific Greenwood" I continued ,slowly offering my hand to shake."N-nice to meet you, He replied , "I'm Daydream , Daydream Night" And then he shook my outstretched hand , and it felt warm , the power of friendship , flowing in my veins.

I was on the 2 and a half hour train to london , when I saw it , a body , on the train track , "Stop!" I yelled , no reply... Soon I saw the body wasn't a body , just a white and red bag floating , with the words -Tesco- neatly printed on its front...


The gong sounded , I ran.I'm first!!!I'm last again, Will I succeed? It's early seconds , but races like this can go from begining to end quickly , but I need to persevere to get there Running. Running.I've done it! I step onto the platform to claim my gold medal.

Can YOU do it??????

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  • superdog7 (Age 12) wrote on Friday, 10 February 2012 @ 12:24

    ok i will try!

  • CuteJess (Age 9) wrote on Friday, 10 February 2012 @ 13:56

    I felt the knife locking into my sides. It was pain but pain was quick. Although dying was immediate, I could feel the agony bleeding out of my side. I wasn't scared of death, I could do this. "Get through this Lila," I thought. The light was drifting into the future.

  • cowmoo1170 (Age 10) wrote on Friday, 10 February 2012 @ 18:20

    I will try but I am very busy