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Tuesday, 31 January 2012


Becca Allen

Richest Girl In Britain (Part Three)

By realwriter (Age 10)

Continued... The class also typed up stories on their laptops. After all, if your story was ultra fabulous then you would get a voucher to any shop! Becca had always wanted to win. Ms Musord, their class teacher walked in sternly. "Good morning class five" Ms Musord began. "Good morning Ms Mustard!" the class shouted back. "Delightful. Anyway, Rosie, you said you show and tell?" Ms Musord exclaimed. "Yep" Rosie smiled and she went to the front of the class. Ali started to yawn, whatever Rosie was going to say, it was bound to be boring! She gave Becca a "can't we just text?" look. But Becca shook her head. "Well. I've got two things actually. I'm going to be attending a One Direction concert" Rosie boasted as the class clapped, "And I'm going on holiday to America, next week". "Alleluia!" Ali said under her breath, she was glad that Rosie would not be pestering them that week. Becca's phone buzzed, a text lay there. It said: Jealous or what? Even if you say no, I'll know you are! From princess. Rosie. And Becca knew it. I'm not in the mood for a fight, thanks: Becca texted back. Will Becca and Rosie have a big contest? Will Becca find out who is faking her?




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  • honeybun00 (Age 11) wrote on Tuesday, 31 January 2012 @ 17:25

    Awesome I love these stories, keep writing!

  • smokeyice (Age 12) wrote on Tuesday, 31 January 2012 @ 19:23

    kool

  • cowmoo1170 (Age 10) wrote on Wednesday, 1 February 2012 @ 19:02

    carry on carry on

  • superdog7 (Age 12) wrote on Sunday, 5 February 2012 @ 16:53

    please make more these are relaly good!