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Thursday, 9 February 2012


Creative writing

My story!

By simba99 (Age 12)

Hey guys, this is the story I'm writing at the moment can you tell me if you like it and if it can be improved!! Thanks!




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  • cowmoo1170 (Age 10) wrote on Friday, 10 February 2012 @ 18:00

    Sure, I will help you but I bet it will be great as you are such a great writer

  • buzzer (Age 10) wrote on Saturday, 11 February 2012 @ 18:07

    Let's see the story!