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Wednesday, 1 February 2012




Monster Babies - A story I wote when I was five!

By AquaPuppy (Age 11)

Hiya, beautiful and ugly peoples of the world and beyond! AquaPuppy, reporting for duty!

This is a story I wrote in Year One :P I tried to publish it once but only half made it. The picture is a copy of the origninal, and this is the ORIGINAL story so all the spellings are uncorrected. Here's the full version!

Once upon a time there were three baby monsters. Jenniffer Chloe and Rosie. Jenniffer was the eldesest she was covered with black. Chloe was middle-sized and was orange. Rosie was the youngest she was golden. They lived with mummy and daddy monster. It was night in the morning mum and dad woke up early leaveing the children in the cave Jenniffer Chloe and Rosie had sqaushed worms for breakfast. Where's our parents askek Rosie We should have awoken them. So they crept out of the cave to them. Suddenly they heard disco music it was the disco drum singing monsters going la la la la la. They had green black red blue orange pink purple indigo violet hair. They played guitars drums violins the base guitar Mummy and Daddy were there. Hello! the called would you like to join us No! called Chloe we would like you to come home! So they waked home and went to sleep and lived happily ever after.





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  • sweetpea (Age 11) wrote on Wednesday, 1 February 2012 @ 14:33

    Awww!!!

  • bodiepal2 (Age 11) wrote on Wednesday, 1 February 2012 @ 17:54

    OMG THAT'S SOOO SWEET!!! :)

  • cowmoo1170 (Age 10) wrote on Thursday, 2 February 2012 @ 20:33

    So sweet

  • superdog7 (Age 12) wrote on Friday, 3 February 2012 @ 15:26

    aww that so sweet!

  • Millz8 (Age 11) wrote on Saturday, 4 February 2012 @ 18:35

    sweet!

  • Bunnycat (Age 13) wrote on Saturday, 4 February 2012 @ 19:41

    cute!!!! My stories when I was little were usually about posh ladies who were going about their usual business when they find a lost cat. That was the storyline with just about all my stories, but I'd usually get fed up of writing halfway through and go play My Little Ponies.

  • AquaPuppy (Age 11) wrote on Monday, 27 February 2012 @ 21:24

    I'll post some more stories from infant school soon!