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Friday, 3 September 2010

Jetray
By jetray (Age 10)
On a cold winters night Jetray zoomed quitly downstares and hid behind the culourful christmas tree,waiting for his best friend Echoecho.Jetray heard a noice.It got bigger and bigger.The noice was echoecho climping to the window .He jumped in to the house and whispered"Are you ready for the party?"
"yes ,I am,"replied Jetray.
They walked out of the door to the darkness. Twigs snaped under their feet ,owls hooted on the tree barks and dogs howled in their cages.Then Jetray saw a singe saying danger.
Jetray and Echoecho walked slowly to the singe.Then they jumped past the singe to a gigantic hole.Jetray and Echoecho slowly walked around the hole .
Luckily they saw a elve they asked the elve "can you help as out ?"
Yes ,"replied the elve. The elve took them to a portal .They jumped in to the portal and they were back home .
Jetray and Echoecho went to bed and wrote about there escapade.
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