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Friday, 18 February 2011




For Fun: Part 2 of Twilight 5!

By Polesxxx (Age 14)

The scent was so powerful and strong, even Edwards sweet scent was blocked out, I tried not to breath but my throat was on fire, it was a never ending pain. Edward grabbed my sturdy arm back. Edward, edward was the only thing I could think about, well apart from the blood. I thought I was going to attack, I was certain about it but a certain scent stopped me. It was such a moist wet smell. I loosened up almost wanting this new scent to fill my lungs up more..i was practicly begging for the blood scent to go."Bella, you are in no state to go and see him, what if you can't control yourself." I had to see him... I turned to the other end of the lavender field where this doggy smell was coming from. Backing away from the human scent I looked up and almost fainted..it was him! "Jake!" I squeaked. Edward gripped me harder but the familiar big boy was smiling so broadly and his arms opened into one of his bear hugs....oh Jacob! Even I felt happy and excited to see him...and i was certain Edward did too! Now I had completly forgotten the blood and was focused on my two best boys...





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  • laurcool (Age 12) wrote on Friday, 18 February 2011 @ 18:35

    You are a great writer! I don't want to sound negative but I'd like to see you write something a bit more...of your own idea. Something not connected to Twilight

  • Mirri04 (Age 13) wrote on Friday, 18 February 2011 @ 21:16

    Please write more Polexxx!I have to know what will happen!

  • Mirri04 (Age 13) wrote on Saturday, 19 February 2011 @ 13:30

    Nice avatar Laurcool:)

  • rhianna9 (Age 10) wrote on Saturday, 19 February 2011 @ 14:44

    Please add more as I am not allowed to watch Twilight as i am too young.

  • Polesxxx (Age 14) wrote on Saturday, 19 February 2011 @ 14:48

    Thanks LauraCool! okay LauraCool...i will do! But I loooooooooooooove twilight! Thanks Mirri....i will! :)

  • puppy8 (Age 12) wrote on Sunday, 20 February 2011 @ 16:05

    wow! that was great,polexxx

  • Polesxxx (Age 14) wrote on Monday, 21 February 2011 @ 15:40

    Thanks guys...of course I will Rhianna9! Thanks puppy8!