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Friday, 10 February 2012


Creative writing

finish the story

By Twinkles (Age 11)

It was there, my heart was racing, the beast stood before me. The emerald green eyes slowly opened, the cracked horns placed on his back made shadows in the glistening moonlight. He came near, giant stomps and thuds on the ground, it felt like thunder underfoot, he reached his strong arm out and....

can you finish this story?

make it funny or scary or sad. 

please comment and tell me if you want me to write more

Twinkles





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  • cowmoo1170 (Age 10) wrote on Friday, 10 February 2012 @ 18:14

    I will leave it to you to finish but don't you agree that it is really good.

  • AnnaK (Age 10) wrote on Friday, 10 February 2012 @ 18:19

    ate me!

  • Bunnycat (Age 13) wrote on Sunday, 12 February 2012 @ 21:19

    I'll have a bash! I'll put it in the creative writing bit titled 'Twinkles' finish the story' so u can find it.