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Tuesday, 7 February 2012


Creative writing

Continuity Errors

By AquaPuppy (Age 11)

Hiya, beautiful and ugly peeps of the world and beyond! AquaPuppy here, with something to sort out...

So, as a couple of you may have noticed, in my story that I am currently writing, there are some parts that don't quite fit in with one another.

~In Chapter One, Alyssa states that she found a picture of her, her brother and her father in a drawer. This part has been DELETED as in another chapter, I said that Alyssa wondered what her dad looked like.

~Alyssa has BROWN EYES, although I previously stated she has blue eyes.

~In Chapter Three, Alyssa wakes up with a pair of crutches and a cast n her arm. There was a small typo, and I meant to say she had a cast on her LEG.

Thanks!

~Aqua~





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  • cowmoo1170 (Age 10) wrote on Tuesday, 7 February 2012 @ 08:58

    Ok that makes sense about the cast now. don't worry we all suffer typos!

  • gummybear (Age 10) wrote on Tuesday, 7 February 2012 @ 16:57

    cowmoo whate r u talking sbout

  • yoi6 (Age 11) wrote on Tuesday, 7 February 2012 @ 18:37

    Hehe!

  • AquaPuppy (Age 11) wrote on Monday, 27 February 2012 @ 21:23

    Also, Candice is supposed to be about 20 or something...