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Thursday, 9 June 2011




Alien

By KahrisK (Age 12)

So what is alien? Do you believe in them? Not the little green guys, the ones big black eyes, but alien. Do you? Do you see that girl? That one, yeah that one. With the long hair and the big bagpack. See the way her hair changes colour in the sunlight? Hazelnut, blond, black, all those and more. See her eyes, the way they never leave her feet? Maybe she has something to hide, or maybe, just maybe, she's scared. Maybe, maybe she's scared someone will find out her secret? See her sweater? You must think its odd in this weather, where you could where a bikini or shorts and still feel hot? So you think she's alien? Or maybe, maybe she's just different. Maybe she's scared of being found out. Oh, wait, see her eyes? See the way they're ringed with not just hazelnut, moss green, grey even blue. Different, so she must be alien. Or maybe, maybe she's just different and scared of being found out as so. Maybe she knows what man do. She's scared. Because thats what you do isn't it? Anything different, anything 'alien' you have to change it, make it 'normal' make 'human'. See her bag pack. See the oblong shapes? They're books. Maybe if you ever dared, maybe if you bothered to ask, you'd find out that they're all fiction. All her ecape, but of course, silly me. You'd never bother to ask would you? You take what you see, and if she isn't exactly like you? You change her, you bully, until her and her difference, everything that makes her who she is, what be gone and you, you would be left with the grey, bleak uniform of just you. Nothing else, just you and however may clones you've managd to recruit. So next time you see her, remember, she's different, not alien, not weird, different and she's proud to be so.





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  • youtube (Age 12) wrote on Friday, 10 June 2011 @ 20:39

    what i dont get that

  • honeyjake (Age 12) wrote on Saturday, 11 June 2011 @ 08:32

    Well done KharisK. Told you you'd like writing on this website!!!! : )

  • gummybear (Age 10) wrote on Saturday, 11 June 2011 @ 10:18

    i dont think they are real i think that just some stupid people are pretending that there are aliens and people have seen them mess around and reported it to the police

  • sweetcandy (Age 10) wrote on Saturday, 11 June 2011 @ 17:27

    That is REALLY good! its also quite moving! post another one!

  • canadawolf (Age 13) wrote on Sunday, 12 June 2011 @ 08:59

    I loved that piece of creative writing!the message that it puts across is so true. If you think about it most people out there can relate to that girl. I sure can anyway! Anyway, amazing story and amazing message. you should be so proud! =]

  • rockgirl (Age 11) wrote on Sunday, 12 June 2011 @ 10:30

    Wow great article! That was really interesting :)

  • kitkat88 (Age 13) wrote on Sunday, 12 June 2011 @ 12:22

    Epic

  • MichyKid99 (Age 12) wrote on Sunday, 12 June 2011 @ 16:37

    coolio

  • renfield (Age 14) wrote on Monday, 13 June 2011 @ 11:08

    Alien life is possible I suppose.

  • KahrisK (Age 12) wrote on Monday, 13 June 2011 @ 16:44

    :3 wow thanks!

  • KahrisK (Age 12) wrote on Monday, 13 June 2011 @ 18:50

    Btw, its not aliens i was trying to get across, it was for people who feel different and alone, and alien :3 just for the peepz that didnt get it :3

  • imapotato (Age 12) wrote on Tuesday, 19 July 2011 @ 17:09

    Wow KahrisK that is so good + really moving. the message it puts out is so true. have u written any others 'cos i would like 2 read them. =] =] =] =] =] =] =] =] =] =] =] =] =] =] =] =] =]

  • KahrisK (Age 12) wrote on Tuesday, 26 July 2011 @ 19:28

    thanks :3 hmmm, i think i have, its called trapped. If you search it you'll find it (i think) :)

  • kitsunela (Age 12) wrote on Thursday, 1 March 2012 @ 11:34

    Wow. This is really great!

  • kitsunela (Age 12) wrote on Thursday, 1 March 2012 @ 11:35

    Wow. This is really great!